Thursday, September 23, 2010

Excuse Me Bruh!.....My Man Get's Deep!

Please understand that I cannot entertain your requests of my time!
My heart has been promised to a brother who is skilled in rhyme...and verse,
but first, let me tell you a little something bout me.
I need a man of SUBSTANCE! His thinking... can't just be... elementary.
And Bullshit!....Oops...Pardon my French Class cuz I was given a hall pass and was excused. 
But back to my views, on hip-hop and men.
Your diamonds lack brilliance when your mind doesn't shine! 
So... You can keep spitting rhymes about your fortune.
and let the whole world know how your brain had a knowledge abortion
But I'm not phased
cuz I'm reminded of days where we had to fight for the right to learn
Now, your ignorance is as degrading as that cross they burned

So excuse me PLEASE...
Make way for real Emcees 
Who don't make up dances to thwart your attention from their words
(Cuz they are not talking about sh!t)
I don't know who worse the dancers or the ones that talk illiterate!!
and this is who our kids look up to??

Nah, move around playa
You not deep enough for me
Nah, I'm not tryna cope any of your CD's 
Your hooks are catchy but that aint enough to camouflage your flow
and if I hear any more auto tune!!! I may just snap
cuz I'm tired of some of this lame rap!!





My Fav! Lupe Fiasco!
LOL! My off-the-top-of-my-head ramblings!

3 comments:

  1. Very nice and eloquently written...LOVIN your style!

    Fav line:
    "Your diamonds lack brilliance when your mind doesn't shine! "

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  2. Love that line as well!! I hop ethe right person gets a hold of this blog and do something with this talent you've been holding on to for 2 decades...:)

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  3. @Toy Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

    @Blk Diva your voice is in the back of my heading cheerleading me along my journey! Thanks so much for your faith in my talent.

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